Sarah was last week's VIP |
Our ski trip was the motivation for some writing this week - first we used a circular plan (looks like a pizza) to help us quickly write eight main events that happened to us during the ski trip, which we then used to create the draft of our recount.
The Dahl group were then looking to recraft one sentence from their work - trying to add in details to make it more descriptive for the reader. What great work they came up with - see some examples on Blogs By Us.
The Mahy group took two of their events in the recount and used the hamburger plan to add more details to each event so that they would be able to create a really descriptive paragraph to extend their main ideas. The improvements made by using the planner were fantastic and we could really see how the details are important for sharing our experience. You can also see these on Blogs by Us.
The Rowling group had been working the past two weeks on My Story (writing entries for the NZ Post Young Writer's Contest) and these have been sent away online by Mrs C. So this week they began writing an informational text titled " What to Expect When You Are Skiing" and they will turn these into posters for next year's skiers to read. These will also eventually be on Blogs By Us.
Hayden was this week's VIP |
Well done to Maria and Sarah who spoke very confidently and presented their speeches well. We were very proud of you. Check out some highlights here:
Maria shared her Connected Award activity - a booklet about her overnight weekend tramp in Fiordland National Park. |
The Student Council Master Chef competition started this week - on Friday Nich created a batch of very delicious butter cupcakes as his contest entry. Good luck to Nich and the other seven Year Five or Six contestants! Mrs C is most willing to be taste-tester!!
Nich shows two samples of his cupcakes (the rest had been eaten!) |
Allynah holds the space rock - it was very heavy for its size! |
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